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'''A two-sentence version:'''"I think less is more. We use data on venture capital-backed startups as their venture capital investment provides just want to try to immunize ourselves against a direct performance measure to identify their clusters. However, referee who thinks we expect might be unaware of that other entrepreneurial firms, such as those identified from business registration data in Guzman . We need a sentence saying it exists and Stern (2015), may have a second-order effect on the clustering of venture-backed firmsanother sentence saying why we don’t use it. And citing one source is probably enough."
Urban Start-up Agglomeration and Venture Capital Investment (view source)
Revision as of 14:19, 27 October 2020
, 14:19, 27 October 2020→Guzman and Stern
====Guzman and Stern====
'''Ed's suggested paragraphThe objective:'''We use data on venture capital-backed startups as their venture capital investment provides a direct performance measure to identify their clusters. However, other entrepreneurial firms may have clusters that influence clusters of venture-backed firms. In particular, pre-venture capital startups, firms that have experienced an acquisition or an initial public offering, and high-growth startups that do not raise venture capital (see Guzman and Stern, 2015, and related papers) may all affect the agglomeration of venture-backed startups. We leave it to future research to examine the relationships between clusters of different types of startups.
'''A hard-and-fast two-sentence version, with a one-sentence pillow:'''
Guzman and Stern (2015) use business registration to find non-venture-backed startups. We do not use this data as it does not have a performance measure to demonstrate the representative layer's selection. However, understanding the relationships between clusters of different types of startups is an exciting topic for future research.
'''The objectiveEd's suggested paragraph:'''We use data on venture capital-backed startups as their venture capital investment provides a direct performance measure to identify their clusters. However, other entrepreneurial firms may have clusters that influence clusters of venture-backed firms. In particular, pre-venture capital startups, firms that have experienced an acquisition or an initial public offering, and high-growth startups that do not raise venture capital (see Guzman and Stern, 2015, and related papers) may all affect the agglomeration of venture-backed startups. We leave it to future research to examine the relationships between clusters of different types of startups.
'''A two-sentence version:"I think less is more. '''We just want use data on venture capital-backed startups as their venture capital investment provides a direct performance measure to try to immunize ourselves against a referee who thinks identify their clusters. However, we might be unaware of expect that other entrepreneurial firms, such as those identified from business registration data. We need in Guzman and Stern (2015), may have a sentence saying it exists and another sentence saying why we don’t use it. And citing one source is probably enoughsecond-order effect on the clustering of venture-backed firms."
'''We should cite their Science paper:'''
